Lesson 1 · Know What You Need to Say
Adult Practical Writing Skills · Course 1
Lesson 1 · Know What You Need to Say
Module 1 · Think, Plan and Write Clearly
Start here · How to use the lesson
Work through the cards in order. Stop before each model until you have completed your own draft and self-check.
All scenarios are fictional. Do not send messages, identification documents or personal details to real organisations for these activities.
By the end of this lesson
- Identify why you are writing.
- Identify who will read your writing.
- Identify the main message the reader needs to understand.
- Pause and think before beginning a practical writing task.
- Revise a message when its purpose is not clear.
Step 1 · Start with a real problem
Daniel is attending an evening business course.
Tomorrow's session has been moved from 5:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. Daniel works until 4:00 p.m. He needs to contact the course coordinator.
Daniel starts writing:
The words are understandable, but the purpose is still difficult to identify.
Daniel has started writing before deciding exactly what the message needs to achieve.
Step 2 · Ask WHY, WHO and WHAT
1. WHY am I writing?
This is your purpose. What does the writing need to achieve?
That is clearer than: I need to write about tomorrow.
2. WHO am I writing to?
This is your reader. Daniel is writing to the course coordinator. The coordinator needs enough information to understand the situation and respond.
3. WHAT is the main message?
If the reader remembers only one thing, what must they understand?
WHY? Why am I writing?
WHO? Who needs to understand this?
WHAT? What is the main thing they need to know?
Practice 1 · Find the purpose
Situation A
You ordered printed business cards. The company told you they would be ready on Friday. It is now Monday and you have received no information.
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Situation B
You registered for a training event on Saturday. You can no longer attend and need to tell the organiser.
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Situation C
An organisation asked you to send a copy of your identification before it can continue processing your application. You are sending it today.
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Practice 2 · Identify the reader
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Write your response in your document or notebook.
Practice 3 · Find the main message
You have an appointment with a service company tomorrow between 9:00 a.m. and 12:00 noon. Nobody will be at home until 2:00 p.m. You need another appointment time.
WHO am I writing to?
WHAT is the main message?
Write your responses in your document or notebook.
Compare
A
B
B gives the reader a clearer idea of both the problem and the action needed.
Step 3 · Complete your writing task
You registered for an orientation session at a training centre. The orientation is tomorrow at 10:00 a.m. An important appointment means you cannot arrive until 12:00 noon. You want to know whether you can still attend.
WHY am I writing?
WHO will read my message?
WHAT is the main message they need to understand?
First draft
Write this version in your document or notebook.
Step 4 · Self-check before seeing the model
Choose Yes / Partly / Not yet.
Can I tell why this person is writing?
Have I given the reader enough information to understand the situation?
Does the reader know what I need from them?
Can the message be understood without guessing?
Open only after your first draft · Model comparison
Here is one possible response:
I am registered for tomorrow's orientation session at 10:00 a.m. I have an important appointment in the morning and will not be able to arrive until 12:00 noon.
Would I still be able to attend the orientation if I arrive at 12:00?
Thank you.
This is not the only successful way to write the message.
- Where does the writer explain the situation?
- Is the reason for writing easy to identify?
- Does the reader know what answer is needed?
- What is one useful difference between this model and your first draft?
Step 5 · Check and revise your writing
Lesson 1 writing check
Choose Yes / Partly / Not yet.
- Is my reason for writing clear?
- Have I written for the correct reader?
- Is my main message easy to identify?
- Would the reader know what I need from them?
- Is the writing understandable without guessing?
Revise your writing
Return to your first draft. Improve it using what you noticed.
- Make your purpose clearer.
- State the situation more directly.
- Make the main message easier to find.
- Remove information that confuses the reader.
Write and save this version separately.
The most important change I made was:
It made my writing better because:
Transfer · Try it somewhere new
You help organise a neighbourhood reading group. You need a quiet room for eight adults next Saturday from 2:00 to 3:00 p.m. Write to the community-centre coordinator to ask whether a suitable room is available and what it would cost.
WHY am I writing?
WHO am I writing to?
WHAT is my main message?
Your message
Write this version in your document or notebook and save it.
When you finish, ask:
- Is my purpose clear?
- Does the reader understand the situation?
- Does the reader know what I need?
Revise if necessary.
Lesson takeaway
Before important practical writing, do not begin with: “What sentence should I write?”
WHY? What am I trying to achieve?
WHO? Who needs to understand this?
WHAT? What is the main message?
Good writing begins before the first sentence.
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